
To Kill a Shadow
Categories
Fiction, Audiobook, Horror, Romance, Young Adult, Fantasy, Romantasy, Fantasy Romance, Magic, Young Adult Fantasy
Content Type
Book
Binding
Hardcover
Year
2023
Publisher
Entangled: Teen
Language
English
ISBN13
9781649374318
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To Kill a Shadow Plot Summary
Introduction
# Shadows of the Eternal Star: A Dance Between Light and Darkness The crimson moon hung like a wound against the starless sky as Kiara Frey pressed her scarred hands against the cracked window of her cottage in Cila. For fifty years, no sun had risen over the kingdom of Asidia, and tonight the Knights of the Eternal Star had come for The Calling. In the village square below, eighteen-year-old boys lined up like lambs for slaughter, knowing most would never return from the cursed Mist that had swallowed half their world. Among them stood her sickly brother Liam, his weak lungs marking him for certain death if chosen. But when brutal Adam shoved Liam to the cobblestones, something primal ignited in Kiara's chest. She moved like smoke on wind, her fist connecting with Adam's jaw before he could react, dancing around his clumsy strikes until he crashed bloodied to his knees. From the shadows stepped Commander Jude Maddox, the scarred legend known as the Hand of Death, his obsidian helmet gleaming in the torchlight. With two words that would echo through her nightmares, he sealed both their fates: "Add her."
Chapter 1: The Calling: A Knight's Selection and a Sister's Sacrifice
Thunder of hoofbeats shattered the pre-dawn silence as the Knights arrived in their black armor, gleaming like beetles in the flickering torchlight. At their head rode Commander Jude Maddox, his face hidden beneath a spiked helmet that had become legend throughout the dying kingdom. They called him the Hand of Death, the sole survivor of last year's expedition into the Mist, returned alone and broken from horrors no man should witness. Kiara watched from her window as families clutched their sons with desperate fingers, knowing The Calling would steal away their boys to die in service to King Cirian's mad dreams. Her parents held back tears as Liam joined the line of eligible recruits, his chin lifted with false courage that broke her heart. The lung condition that plagued him would kill him long before any monster could, yet still he stood ready to serve. Adam's cruel whispers and violent shove sent Liam sprawling across the cobblestones, and something ancient and furious awakened in Kiara's blood. She moved without thought, her uncle Micah's brutal training evident in every fluid strike. Adam crashed to his knees, thoroughly humiliated before the entire village, blood pooling from his mouth as the crowd gasped in stunned silence. The commander stepped forward from the shadows, his helmeted head turning toward her with predatory interest. When he spoke, his voice was velvet and steel, cutting through the night air like a blade. She gave her name with shoulders squared despite the fear clawing at her throat, and watched as he remained motionless for heartbeats that stretched like hours. His words fell like a death sentence wrapped in opportunity. The girl who had spent eighteen years hiding her scarred hands beneath leather gloves, who had endured whispers of being cursed, suddenly found herself conscripted into the most feared military order in the kingdom. As the Knights prepared to depart, Kiara cast one last look at the cottage where Liam waited, knowing she might never see her brother again.
Chapter 2: Trials of Steel and Shadow: Training Among the Knights
The capital city of Sciona rose before them like a monument to despair, its glass palace piercing the clouds with twin spires sharp enough to cut the sky. Kiara marched with the other recruits through gates decorated with severed heads, past streets painted in shades of gray and ash where hope had died with the sun. The Knights' sanctum lay buried beneath the palace like a tomb, its circular training room lit by a massive iron chandelier and lined with enough weapons to outfit an army. Lieutenant Harlow surveyed the recruits with winter-cold eyes, his red hair catching the torchlight as he explained the brutal reality they faced. Only the best would survive to become Knights. The rest would be sent to the Guard, a death sentence wrapped in duty and false honor. Among her fellow recruits, Kiara found unlikely allies in Patrick, a gentle boy with scholarly knowledge who reminded her painfully of Liam, and Jake, whose easy grin masked sharp intelligence and fierce loyalty. The training was merciless beyond imagination. When Harlow paired her against Patrick in the fighting ring, demanding she show no mercy to the boy who had become her friend, Kiara held back her killing strikes. The lieutenant's fury erupted like a volcano, his fist connecting with her jaw in a bone-crushing blow that filled her mouth with blood. But Kiara smiled through crimson teeth and struck back, her knuckles finding the same spot he had hit her. The blow sent Harlow staggering, his own blood spattering the stones as shock flickered across his face. For a moment, the chamber fell silent except for the sound of her body hitting the ground as his retaliation knocked her unconscious. But from the shadows, she glimpsed a figure watching with clenched fists, something like rage flickering across scarred features before darkness claimed her. When she woke hours later, Patrick hovered over her with worried eyes, his gentle hands checking her injuries with the care of a born healer. On her bedside table sat a jar of healing ointment that smelled of mint, accompanied by a note in crude handwriting that made her pulse quicken. She knew without question who had left the gift, and the gesture sent warmth spiraling through her chest in ways she didn't dare examine too closely.
Chapter 3: Beyond the Veil: Entering the Cursed Lands
The test came without warning, recruits herded into pitch-black caverns where salendons, the king's pet monsters, lurked in underground rivers that had never known sunlight. Kiara found herself grouped with Patrick, Jake, and two other boys whose names she barely knew, thrust into absolute darkness where panic should have consumed her. Instead, something impossible happened that changed everything she thought she knew about herself. Light emanated from the cavern walls themselves, a yellowish glow that pulsed with her heartbeat and fear, revealing paths that appeared before her eyes like golden threads. She led them through the maze of stone with supernatural certainty, following instincts she didn't understand toward safety she couldn't guarantee. When one of the unnamed recruits fell into the churning waters and the beast's growls echoed through the cavern, Kiara didn't hesitate. She dove into the freezing river, her hands finding scaled flesh in the darkness as the salendon writhed beneath her touch. The creature was massive, its serpentine body thrashing as she climbed onto its back, lungs burning as they fought underwater. Her fingers found its throat, driving deep until scales gave way to muscle, then bone, and she felt its life force draining away like smoke through her scarred palms. When she surfaced, gasping and half-dead from cold, strong arms pulled her from the water with surprising gentleness. Commander Maddox carried her to the bathing chamber, his scarred face finally revealed without the obsidian helmet that had hidden his features. Two red scars cut across his left eye, which held a milky-blue hue that seemed to glow in the torchlight, while his raven hair framed features that were both beautiful and terrible. As he held her in the warm water, his hands steady and sure, Kiara saw past the legend to the broken man beneath. He was younger than she'd expected, perhaps twenty, with the hollow look of someone who had seen too much death and dealt too much pain. When she challenged him, when she pressed her gloved hand to his chest and felt his heart racing, the air between them crackled with dangerous electricity that neither could ignore.
Chapter 4: Divine Awakening: The Truth of Scarred Hands
Their encounters became a dance of advance and retreat, stolen moments in empty corridors where words carried more weight than weapons. Jude gave her a book, his mother's final gift, filled with lore about the gods and the curse that had stolen their sun. In its pages, she read of Raina, the Sun Goddess who had fallen in love with a mortal man, and how that forbidden love had led to her disappearance from the sky. The ancient tome whispered secrets that made her scarred hands burn with recognition. Fifty years ago, Raina's mortal lover had grown greedy for power, seeking to steal the goddess's divine essence for himself. With a blade forged of pure moonshine, he had pierced her heart and shattered her power into three fragments. One piece he claimed for himself, absorbing it into his black heart. The second shot across the realm to find a new host, while the third remained with the fallen goddess. Kiara's hands trembled as she read, the blue-black scars on her fingers seeming to pulse in rhythm with her racing heart. Born on the summer solstice, marked by strange wounds that had never healed, immune to the Mist's poison that drove others mad, the connections were too numerous to ignore. She was one of the keys they sought, she realized with dawning horror and wonder. When masked attackers emerged from the fog during their mission into the cursed lands, something inside her snapped like a breaking dam. Shadows erupted from the earth at her command, and a wind that smelled of home swept through the clearing as her true nature finally revealed itself. The attackers screamed as darkness consumed them, leaving only ash in its wake while golden fire danced around her fingertips. Jude stared at her with new understanding, seeing not just the girl he had grown to love but something far more dangerous and divine. The fragments of a goddess stirred within her, and with each passing moment, Kiara was becoming something beyond mortal comprehension. Yet when he looked at her, she saw not fear but wonder, as if he had been waiting his entire life to witness such terrible beauty unleashed upon the world.
Chapter 5: Betrayal Unveiled: The Ancient Enemy's Face
The village of the damned sprawled below them like a wound in the earth, its tents and fires shrouded in mist thick as grave dirt. Kiara's heart stopped when she saw her friends, Patrick, Jake, and Alec, bound and dragged before creatures that wore human faces but moved with inhuman hunger. These were not ordinary bandits but something far worse, the walking dead sustained by the Mist's poison and an endless hunger for living flesh. When the leader removed his mask, he revealed a nightmare of rotting flesh and fangs like broken glass, his jaw unhinging with a wet crack that released a howl speaking of centuries spent in darkness. The others followed suit, dropping their disguises to show the truth beneath. They were undead creatures caught between life and death, and the village was their feeding ground where Kiara's friends would become tonight's offering. The monster chose Alec first, those terrible fangs piercing his throat in a spray of crimson as the young warrior died without a sound, his green eyes flashing silver as life left them. Kiara screamed then, a sound that shattered the night and sent shadows racing across the earth as the power within her erupted like a dam bursting. The undead shrieked as her darkness consumed them, their rotting forms crumbling to ash before the fury of a goddess's daughter. But the true horror came later, in the magical glen where flowers bloomed in impossible colors and crystal streams sang with pure water. As Kiara read deeper into the ancient tome, the terrible truth revealed itself with crushing clarity. The mortal lover who had betrayed Raina, who had shattered her divine essence and plunged their world into eternal night, still walked among them wearing a familiar face. Patrick, gentle Patrick who reminded her so painfully of her lost brother, was the architect of their world's destruction. Every kindness he had shown, every moment of friendship, had been a lie designed to bring her within reach of his blade. He had waited fifty years for this moment, gathering the fragments of stolen divinity so he could complete what he had started and claim the power of a god for himself.
Chapter 6: Fragments United: Battle for the Godslayer Blade
The blade slid between her ribs like a lover's caress, cold steel parting flesh with surgical precision as Patrick's familiar face smiled down at her with ancient malice. His voice was no longer the gentle tone she remembered but something older, crueler, as her blood painted the cursed ground crimson beneath the bloated moon. The pain was extraordinary, not just the physical agony of steel piercing flesh but the deeper wound of absolute betrayal. This was the boy she had protected, had loved like a brother, had trusted with her life. Now she understood why he had reminded her so strongly of Liam. He had studied her, learned her weaknesses, crafted himself into the perfect lure to draw her close enough to strike. Behind her, she heard Jude's roar of fury, felt Jake's desperate attempt to reach her as Patrick twisted the blade and spoke of Raina with poisonous nostalgia. He had loved the Sun Goddess, he claimed, but it had never been enough. She had been content to let him remain beneath her, never her equal, and that inequality had festered in his heart like a cancer for five decades. The Godslayer blade emerged from the earth where he planted it, black metal inscribed with symbols that hurt to look upon. This was the weapon that had shattered a goddess, that had plunged their world into eternal twilight, and now it would finish what it had started. But Jude would not let her die alone, even as Patrick raised the blade for the killing blow. Familiar hands touched her face as a beloved voice commanded her to stay, and she felt Jude pouring something into her, warmth and light and life itself. His own divine fragment flowed into her wounds like liquid gold, the healing burning worse than the blade had as two pieces of stolen divinity recognized each other and merged. When the impossible magic was complete, she found herself changed once more, two of the three fragments now pulsing within her chest while new scars marked them both like wedding bands forged in pain.
Chapter 7: The Price of Dawn: Love's Ultimate Sacrifice
The final battle erupted in a field of Midnight Blooms, their purple petals drinking in the spilled blood like wine as Patrick summoned allies from the depths of the cursed lands. Creatures of shadow and fang emerged at his call, led by Lorian, the God of Beasts and Prey, but even divine aid could not prepare them for what Kiara had become. She was shadow and light incarnate, darkness and fire dancing in perfect harmony as the power of two goddesses flowed through her veins. Her blade sang as it carved through flesh and bone, while Jake fought beside her with desperate courage, his loyalty unshaken even as the world exploded around them in violence and magic. When the reanimated corpse of his friend Nic rose to attack them, Jake made the hardest choice of all, driving his blade through the skull of the boy he had loved like a brother. But it was Jude who paid the highest price when Patrick's blade found his heart with surgical precision, the Godslayer drinking deep of divine blood as light faded from his mismatched eyes. The scream that tore from Kiara's throat was not entirely human, a sound of grief so pure it shattered trees and split the earth while shadows and golden fire consumed everything in their path. She killed Patrick with his own blade, driving the Godslayer deep into his immortal heart, and as he died, the fragment of Raina's power he had hoarded for fifty years broke free like a sphere of pure sunlight. She could have claimed it for herself, could have become a goddess in truth and ruled over the world she had saved. Instead, she pressed it into Jude's lifeless hands and poured every ounce of her love into his still heart, calling upon magic that was not divine but something deeper. The power of a soul that refused to let go, that would tear apart the very fabric of reality before accepting loss. Light exploded from Jude's chest as the third fragment merged with his essence, his eyes opening golden and terrible as life returned to his mortal frame. But the cost was written in the way he looked at her with wonder and fear, understanding what she had done and what she had given him. He was the key to their world's salvation now, the one prophesied to restore the sun, while she retained only the darkness that had always been hers.
Summary
In the aftermath of battle, as the cursed mist began to thin and the first hints of true dawn touched the horizon after fifty years of eternal night, Kiara understood the full weight of what they had accomplished and what it had cost them. The fragments of Raina's power were united at last, the sun was rising, and their world was being reborn in light and hope. Yet Jude was gone, vanished into the thinning mist with the burden of godhood and a warning that enemies still lurked even in the palace itself. The prophecy was fulfilled, the darkness had fallen for the light, and dawn painted the sky in shades of gold and crimson as the people of Asidia witnessed the miracle they had fought and died to achieve. But as Kiara watched the sun rise for the first time in her life, the scars on her hands pulsing with residual shadow magic, she wondered if some victories were too costly to truly call triumph. The world was saved, but the shadows in her heart would never fully fade, and love's ultimate sacrifice had proven that even gods must pay the price for salvation.
Best Quote
“It was greater than divinity, than magic. What I felt for her was infinite.” ― Katherine Quinn, To Kill a Shadow
Review Summary
Strengths: The review highlights the book's initial appeal, particularly the first 100 pages and the cover design. The premise and design of the book are also appreciated. Weaknesses: The review criticizes the book for its lack of consistent world-building and character development, particularly noting a shift in the female main character's portrayal. The rapid romantic development and story inconsistencies are also points of contention. The ending and epilogue are particularly disliked, and the book's reliance on common tropes without unique execution is noted. Overall: The reader expresses significant dissatisfaction with the book, rating it poorly and deciding not to continue the series. The book's initial promise is overshadowed by its perceived flaws, leading to a strong recommendation against it.
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